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But now we start with ...
Title: NonDimenticartiDiMe
Author: Latok
Site Origin: EFP
Abstract: The author has no major problems with grammar or syntax. But a story written in an Italian semi-comprehensible is not automatically decent, as was stated in a moment.
Me Not Forgotten. (This title gives me a satisfaction that you can not imagine)
.. Losing someone you love
is losing half of yourself ..
.. forget someone you love
is to lose yourself .. (As I like these early full of pathos)
-1 ° Chapter
" Please do not go, do not leave me .." (Latok, not to break right away, but if the "three points" are called "Three points," perhaps there is a reason, you say that?)
"I .."
" is NOT TRUE! YOU DO NOT OWN ANYTHING! " (The crowd suddenly)
I screamed. I was shaken (We had noticed a thread, you know, dear?) , the news I had arrived an hour before the departure of Gustav ..
"Calm down treasure .. You will be 'to find, you know .. "
" No, I do not want. remains O x or disappearing forever . " (I would not again break the balls, but not in the stories is that it emphasizes to minchiam. There are other ways to make it clear to the reader that a certain sentence is important. But obviously does not know them Latok)
was blackmail but he had to decide and I would not have been able to see him back x (Sigh) then leave again. I could not let it go. I was too fragile ..
" Sorry .. .. I love you " (Menomale. love her but you feel an hour before you go in for Butt we do not know what. Carino six)
He said giving me a the last kiss face (I said "Giving me a last kiss on the forehead?" What strange greeting) , then around 'and got into the car. ( Ah, the whole 'mess I'm in the middle of the road?)
" .. Fuck .. "
I went back home (yes, they were in the middle of the road)
" Ah Aaaaaaahhhhh (It would be a laugh to Nelson? Seems a scream) if your type not gone! "
" MONSTER NO MORE !!!!!" (Ma do not need 'is string of exclamation! It is understood, however, that screams. And the capital is a way to yell vulgar characters. It took was a "I cried" after the phrase h)
yelled (Ah here, you see that you know are not case sensitive. So why use them?) in full hysterics to my brother. He knew it was a serious matter and I embrace ' (Spaces at random) .. I burst into tears. My sister was the only person who could understand me. My mother was never home and my father had moved to Italy with his new wife (Useful, since they do not even know the name of the protagonist) . Days went by and I feel more and more depressed ("A feeling" here there is a bad thing, but a bad thing) that Gustav would not let me in peace because I had deleted all my messages and my numbers when I said that started (Actually you did not, or does start Latok scenes moments random skipping steps useful?) sent me messages from your phone Bill or Tom or Georg ( He might as well skip this part then. But that unnecessary scenes) .. But I did not answer.
-2 ° Chapter
FIVE YEARS AFTER (Five years and we still do not even know the name of the protagonist)
" Tokiiiiiiiiii!! "( God, the self-insercion spudoratissima no, please!) (But, Toki, a curiosity. We fit the keys when you type? What is' I'm surplus" i "?)
" dicaaaaaa me!" (Yes, the keys fit) (I think so because I'm good, not disilludetemi)
I tappai ears (I'd do it too, but if I plug my eyes I can not review. cruel world)
" off immediately! "
" Ugh ......" (But you can not always put two dots and then put together ten! not work!)
She lowered her 'till I could no longer' hear the cd Tokio Hotel (She heard the CD, not the music. Like me, I drink glasses, not containing water)
" was not a question was a statement. Shut Down. "
She died quite (What he says about then off to do if it does she?)
" How did you sclerotic Flee! " (But apart from that. Flee .. but who the fuck are you?)
spoke she just said "Bill," shouted by-splitting eardrums. But these are details. (So Flee is the protagonist? Latok I destabilizes. I'm not understanding anything)
" When is Tokio?" (The Toki and The Tokyo who are they? Who is speaking? DICK)
" I do not know 'half , "The Star
was my absolute half (Who the fuck is Stella?" There was ever made!) . I could not live without her.
"treasure uh .." (Poor two points thrown at random in the middle of the page and ripped away at their little brother)
" delete it." (Delete what? Please Latok, add a subject, an explanation ...)
"But Maybe .."
"No .
Every day, he sent messages to Toki. Torture. (No, the only message sent. The torture something a little different)
" So does anything .. (Scene so useful that the characters themselves realize that they "do nothing" if they are ignored) So .. Come with me to the concert? "
" If I've obligated (When was this?) , it is only logical that I love to be there .. .-. "
Sbuffai. For my birthday I had bought 4 tickets for the concert of Tokio Hotel .. ( But do not compel it, you got just got tickets!) (The third bullet, by God!)
Sta bitch! (Yeah, real cruelty. Denunciala got to get you the tickets)
" BEAUTIFUL" (Now who is he? Who called?)
" Bellaaaaa tesooooooo'!!!!"
" Cappellaiaaaa Good day! " (Ready, hygiene center mental? Hello. I wish you came to pick up some obviously disturbed individuals. Yes Yes, find the address at the beginning of the review. Thanks)
The Denise (Who the fuck is Denise? Where comes out?) we had nicknamed "Mad Hatter" ..
Feel .. is the same! Mad, there is no one like her! (is justified because he knows that is a bitch)
" Hello to you too, Stregatta Abstract! xD " (Smilies! Madonna How beautiful smilies in a written text. Adorable) (Yes, I was ironic. Smilies stories suck the raccoons)
And I was the Stregatta Abstract because my favorite animals are cats. (I like horses, but it's not that my friends call me Cavalla Golosa)
" Shaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!" (But because the characters scream? But Latok speaks like in real life?)
My brother called me by name. (Shaaaaaaaaa your name? What a funny name)
My mother was at home. (What hits with the fact that your brother calling you?)
" Arrival Aaron!"
I climbed the stairs to quickly followed by two girls and I arrived in the kitchen (Ok, at least now we know that there were three. Too bad you have at least five or six names / nicknames and you do not know who the fuck associate)
" Hello baby! So everything okay? "
" All wonders. "
replied coldly (But why wrap? Mica does not work that way. There you go in case h)
" Sharon .." (Ok, we summarize. Shaaaaaaaaa The protagonist is called, Sharon, Cat, Flee and Toki. The thing speaks for itself)
reproach me 'my brother
"No. Just . I'm going to try. YOU come from? " (But you have your period? What 'response is?)
" One moment .. "
Lara had arrived, his girl. (useful characters enter the scene. But then what is' house is a station?)
"Flee Hello! Hello .. I love .. "
call me" Flee "because when I sing I resemble LaFee ( For the uninitiated, like me, is a famous German singer) so it's a kind of abbreviation. (Trivia: But when you sing you transfigure, that looks like the only time, or do you express yourself like a goat and Tibetan mean that your voice like his?) (In reality, Tibetan goats are very intelligent animals)
" Come on !!!!" (Ok, stop. From now on I will not comment more clearly the contempt he feels towards Latok punctuation. I do not know that there have been disagreements between the two, but it must be serious stuff. Latok otherwise would not so bad)
" I do not stand over, little sister .."
" .. Script .."
My favorite phrase was "I do not have him" .. But you can 'say I was our sentence! (If we can explain something in a while. But so eh, it's a suggestion. It is crucial that we understand it, so we're just readers)
As the necking stopped (when I started ? Latok Why not tell us what to combine your characters? I feel sad ) , the Lalla (But yes, other nicknames Throw! Joy! So the story follows so easily ...)
I said "Come with us to see the new music store? I heard that there are some magnificent batteries! And then you do not know 'who's famous! Eddaiiiii .. .. -Eyes-Sweet- (I'm going to throw up a second, sorry. This "-Eyes-Sweet," he stretched out)
sighed. (Me too)
" .. All right .. " (.. Sigh ..)
you start 'jumping around making small urletti. (Who knows when I called the nurses come first?)
" not ask?"
I said my mother. (But Christ! Already a club you do not understand, plus wraps a dick ... he does this deliberately?)
" Both TU you out again, then .. " (If you were my daughter did not come out for six months, know this)
I turned to the girls
" Come?"
"yes .." (This is all wrong. Segnatevelo: The affirmative particle wants to focus! )
" you .." ( It 'just so convinced you write ...)
My mother still'
" Bring Larissa." ( Other characters in Muzzano)
" Sese .." (Even if it is good to pass off the excuse "The teenagers talk like that," the right phrase would be "if, if ..."
***
arrived at the shop with my little sister Larissa and the other girls saw a lot of geese, of which two were pulling my hair screaming that I do not know 'who was his only ..
Mah.
"Flee From ! Spicciatiiii>. \u0026lt;" (Do not take it anymore with these vowels stretched to infinity)
"Ooooo arrivooooo" (OK, pretend it did not open his mouth)
I went with my sister making me space in her arms. Was three years old but weighed a bang .. XD ("XD" what? "What is there to do" XD "?)
" Batteieeeee! Batteieeeeee! "
I screamed in my ears. (Brava child. Larissa already I like it. E ' the most marked character, yet. We know his name and his age) Also she liked the batteries. Come to the right place (It was a point in the space on the ground that says "The right place?" Just to what?) I stopped to watch a beautiful Black Pearl (Point)
" Beaaaa Beaaaaaa! & Rdquo ;
Lari had depressed and she of course I run 'on.
" Shit! Larissa! "
then began to chase it did not see more 'and went into absolute panic. (Ma a child of three years does not run like Usain Bolt. Even if it catches the beat, if you have a broken leg)
" Hey ness! Where is .. "
" I DO NOT KNOW! " (But she ran three seconds ago! What, you are teleported?)
I said screaming. Aaron hug me '.
"Ok Sha .. Calm down .. Now we find it .. " (Of course, calmly ...)
Thanks:
Niky94: Oh mein Gott! Tipaaaa Danke! *.* You make me move ..
dumb-me-I keep if you keep your xk I'm dying to curiositààààààà ;!!!!!!! (died) >. \u0026lt;A super kiss! \u0026lt;3
Now we turn to warnings .. Can not 'be that Miglionico (MiGlioni. Yeah. The famous "Miglionico" by Marco Polo) of people present a I do reviews! (Actually can not be someone who positively reviewed ... It 's very strange)
Pleaseeeee!
Warning: If no one I reviewed, I do not go on .. I'm sorry! (I guess that the continuity, after my) (How much are these warnings on the fuck? Rather than blackmailing a review site so I'll eat your hands. If you write just to get review then it is useless! This prostitution is a literary)
Oh thanks, it's over.
The next two chapters tomorrow, which are now exhausted.
do not know how we can expect Fanfo someone reads this ... written ... story ... uhm ... this thing for fun.
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