is back with the "" wonderful "" "The story of Toki! I hope it Be glad, because I have suffered very much, in reading it.
I do not think of going forward with this story, because his stupidity is also boring. And
prefer to read bad stuff but that makes you laugh, if your junk or treated: p So
(unless many do not weep in mourning for that matter) say "Hello, hello" NonDimenticartiDiMe.
started!
Title: NonDimenticartiDiMe
Author: Latok
Site Origin: EFP
-3 ° Chapter
" There it is!"
I said Denny (The Denny. If there's one thing I hate are the errors derived from the dialects. It would take so little to be correct by a beta ...) pointing to my sister who was holding one hand and cried.
" Lari!"
exclaimed running to her, I saw that when I leave 'hand I do not know' and those who came to meet me
" I swear that if you do it again. .
" CusaCusaaaaa" (Ok, the small talk bad ... but why the double capital and the two words run together? These are your errors, Toki, not the child)
she told me through tears (You could not break the sentence so that it sucks to rats? What, long sentences are bad?)
" Sorry .."
I raised my head to see if they said to me.
I stood paralyzed. (nice! At least the story ends with this bad thing happened to the protagonist!) (Unfortunately it is not true, not all)
was there. In front of me. With chocolate brown eyes locked on mine (Comma) now, after his departure, colored ice. (I doubt it?)
Gustav. (Hello, Gustav)
" is your daughter?" (The fact of not knowing how to type correctly is "capital" does not mean that you can put tiny. He opened World and did everything himself, it is not difficult. Or put it as "E '" ;, as I do when I'm feeling particularly lazy)
seemed so much a mother?
" Nono .. is my sister .. " (four errors in a sentence of five words. It can not, come on)
" is a bit 'naughty, eh? " (I give up, do as you please. I can not emphasize the same things)
I smiled. That smile made me feel sick, so was the time that I did not see.
averted my gaze from her eyes.
" Yes. Sometimes it is even worse .. Crazy me and my brother .. " (I own those pricks who even remembers you. Who would not?)
" Have we met? " ( Georg in this story has serious mental problems. How can you not recognize their former, which in theory has been important to you? E 'from brain)
I asked suddenly.
Yes. We know each other .. We loved all those years ago '.. I still love you even if you never admit it (And if after five years you have not rebuilt a life you have big problems, you were counting children) , even under torture (Let? Pull out the hose and the clamps? ) .. I regret having to lie .. But I have to .. For your own good .. (But if you decide he is for his own good or not! I hate these excuses trivial) (saws that do not mind rubbing anything to anyone)
" No. . I'm sorry .. "I
eyes swelled with tears (I noticed now as there is a fixed point MAI) (Actually no, there is one after" Gustav ". But only one since the beginning of the story)
" I have to go, sorry .."
" least tell me your name .." (Tell me what do you care. I wonder mica as to all those that cross, you know what a mess otherwise?)
" Sharon .." (And she tells him. The fair idiocy) (Double idiocy, because they do not want to be recognized)
Then I turned away and went
Reached my friends asked if we could go
" Why?"
"What have you got Flee?"
" sister .. Why are you crying? " (As remains unclear who speaks in the dialogues of Latok. Thank goodness that makes them speak little)
" Please .. Let's go .. "He
look 'back in (In back is beautiful) and I know ' which saw him because I took his arm and took me 'out.
The other without saying a word followed us. (They were too astonished to speak. They wondered what evil fate had meant that should be your friend. Will the author, girls)
***
got home crying with my brother and my sister (They cried together, in unison) .. The girls (The girls) were go home without asking me questions about my sudden tears .. My mother had gone out again to "work" (so named but I do think the worst ...) and so I also had to cook dinner .. (You have to prepare a meal for two people and a girl, not a Christmas meal for forty people eh)
" kill me! Kill me! " (I was not normal that I told you now eh! You are witnesses! And that damn ambulance of the asylum yet arrives)
I had started yelling at Aaron (What you ask what the hell he got to do the entire 'story is, poor)
" WORLD OF SHIT! Where is JUSTICE ??!!?!?!?" (I've been wondering myself. Why do some people own a PC?) (My personal solace in part)
My brother remained silent, staring at me .. He could not do anything else, he knew how I felt. (No, he was shocked and hoped to be adopted, because they share genetic heritage with a well is not a good thing)
" sister, please stop it .." ("... you make me ashamed ")
begged me .. I could not .. I felt the phone vibrate and I answered without even looking at who he was. (For a answers the phone who wants to die ...)
" Hello?"
I said in a trembling voice ..
" Sharon?"
" Oh God! Georg! "
" Hello baby! Why is voice suck? Sore throat? xD " (Smilies precipitate the story of at least three steps, based on my rating scale. And the story was already worth)
was a jack ass, but I was so happy to hear his voice that I highly fregai. (But you were not on the brink of suicide three lines ago?)
" No. . Never mind .. Why did you call? "
Tears had temporarily stopped falling ..
" We are there in your part! Come for a ride? Bill would love to see you again! " (Not only is the ex of one of the TH, pucci girlfriend is also the peak of everyone else. But this stuff should not remain in the secret diaries of twelve years old? Why is a site for amateur writing?)
" I. .."
"There will be Gustav .. Quiet, I'm not so stupid .. " (In all history, for the moment, you'd be the only one. But I already know 'minds that, then I have no illusions)
I thought for a moment then said
"Why , no? Where are you? " (The hysteria has gone well? Will be happy with your brother, since two idiots you console a lot more of him) (Ok, on second thought maybe he is happy, actually) He laughed
" If you look out your window you see me, Tonto! \u0026lt;3 "(The little heart ... madonna santa) (A little 'I am ashamed to know that that's a little heart, but I was twelve years too)
Courses in the kitchen and moved the curtain covering the window.
I saw him. My best friend. The only person who had kept his promise ..
Do not make me suffer. (What emo stuff)
I hastily wiped her tears and I said to Aaron
" I'm going out Bro! Ge there! You come? " (Bro? Brother? Mioddio, but because an Italian must put 'ste robe in his stories?)
He stares at me' wrong but then smiled (Because you get up from your feet smiling, not for others)
" No, sore between ( Sigh) I'm at home with Lari .. I love dumb miaaaa! ^. ^ "
" Piccolooo I too! " (But who is stretching the words to say very normal stuff? But this girl beat the test? No, of course. If read aloud their stories heard the crap that makes his characters say and avoid)
took the money, and I put the phone in your pocket all (Via the 'me'. It is obvious that your pockets are, I doubt if I put my stuff into the pockets of someone who was passing by case) to then go out and run into the arms of Georg. In
arm in the true sense of the word! XD (Knowing this is useful in. ..?)
" Hello little one!"
" Bellooo Hello!"
I clung to him for not fall and he took me by the legs to help me ..
" So how? " (What are you asking? A speech that you have left behind the last time?)
" Now you're here it's better .. & rdquo ; (Oh no, was asking her how she is! Latok, looks just like that is not asked in Italian eh)
" I'm glad, baby .." (Other nicknames that those twenty or thirty of the first chapter were few)
He said he gave me a kiss on the cheek and moving the honey blonde hair.
I stood up to him and looked for a moment. (But if you are in arm with him that you raise your legs ... how can you stand? At best it makes you fall)
He had been .. As if to say ..
him was not changed, always had emerald green eyes of his great and long hair .. (In Crucconia, a country where the FF is set, usually people tend to change color of eyes every few years? But that curious custom ...)
Then the muscles were increased! XD (at most "but" not "then")
" setting? "
I asked him, smiling
" No excuse .. Nothing .. "
" You've changed, you know? "
" That statement tontaaaa! >. \u0026lt;" (You have no idea what I am trying to rewrite 'history is in an Italian decent and sensible) (But would a crap, because of the plot, then let it go)
was obvious that I was changed. (not so obvious eh)
I was taller, had longer hair (Appunto. I do not grow more than thirteen years since I have long hair and are always equal) and eyes .. His eyes were now a deep blue sea, a blue ice. (No, seriously. eyes not change color! But for nothing! What idiot can do it why should yours?)
" I know .. "
I answered him, smiling.
" Geeee! And then I'm a pig! " (?? EH?) (Why are all cry?)
I heard the unmistakable voice, even if not listened to for a long time, my sex- gott (I say it means' I run? Please. It had to do it the author, but obviously annoyed) preferred.
Tom Kaulitz.
" scendereeeee me!" (nerves that makes me 'is the protagonist)
yells in my ears and I give up 'immediately. (Of course, poor.'s Have broken through the eardrums. Mado who took the blows if he did it to me)
" Beautiful Sharon! How is it? " (but still 'I' is"? Do not use! We stuffed it in his head?)
" Hello Tom! & Rdquo ;
run with them I said to him. (Commas should be used but ...)
The only difference was that he could not jump on him ..
For the simple fact that it was kind of a pig! (join the sentences, yes or no?)
" dog .. We were up, you know? "
" Porco! XD "
spoke against the soft cotton of his sweatshirt. (We do not know in what way has become the darling of the TH, but we know that members of the group use to add much fabric softener when doing laundry. First things first, and rightly so)
" Come on bro, let me greet Sha! " (I'll spoiler, Bill is talking about. Character very well made, a real woman whining)
I left Tom and hugged Bill, as he did years ago, 'sneak' head between my neck and my hair. (POS What the hell is it? Demand to see it. Now. Now!)
" always make me feel bigger, you know Billini ?" (sneak into my head between the neck and hair? Why should this have an effect aging?)
" But you're older big sister .."
Bill and I always felt there brother and sister .. I do not know 'why! = D (Why the author is a fan of TH , which, moreover, did not even want to invent a story so)
"Ugh he's even noticed! "
Grumpy 'Tom.
I turned towards him.
" braids? Yes, I noticed! Do you take me for? "I said pretending
offense. (In fact the only one offended should be the real Tom, that is passed to a hysterical bimbaminkia) (Correct me, all four TH should feel offended by FF on them. Thank goodness those poor guys do not know the Italian) (Who can help me to translate 'ste robe in German?)
Then I rivoltai to Bill who was sulking in his shoes fixed.
Sbuffai.
" .. And yes, I also noticed the Bill thy crest! You are both very well! " (good opportunities to use correct grammar thrown in the toilet) (also the dignity of Bill is thrown in the toilet, I would like to emphasize. I begin to think that this girl is an anti, or I explains why his heroes make go to the hysterical queens )
I turned to Georg
" The only one that did not change anything are you? & rdquo ;
was about to reply when I heard Bill say
" Even Gustav did not change anything! "
I moved away from him, my smile went out, happiness in seeing my best friends went with it and looked down at holding back tears .. (My Mother, for a name? And when he sees you do, you kill yourself?)
" Bill you are really stupid you know?" (No, it is Sharon who is totally deficient and has no sense of measure)
said Tom.
Georg came to me and hug me '
" Scusalo Girl .. We told him not to talk about .. I'm sorry .. " (" It 's a jerk, but touching take it as it is, because he is the one that appeals to us bimbominkiaragazzine and sell those CDs full of canzonacce)
" Never mind .. Quiet, a bit of 'me go .. " (There was not even begin if we are honest)
I whispered away from him and taking a handkerchief to blow my nose.
"Sorry Sha .."
I said sorry Bill ..
" Quiet .. Go after a while 'pass me .. "
" We go to McDonald's ? " (" What I do not care about giving head in this mental deficient ")
TomChurches.
I wanted to hug him for having changed the subject. (Which proves your idiocy. Usually if you're bad you do not want to eat meat (?) Of unknown animals)
" Ok!"
***
We ate like pigs .. I did not eat so .. Well, never mind .. ("What have the short-term memory and I do not remember")
" What do you think?"
I asked Georg.
" Pago?"
" But we do not even think about!"
I gave him a kiss on the cheek
" Grazieee! \u0026lt;3! " (Love do not love .... And then you pay at McDonald's before. Latok Heck, we'll have to Mk each time, no?)
then transmitted to the radio a song I've heard .. (ten euro bet that is a song of TH)
.. It's raining today
The blinds are shut
It's Always the same
I tried to play the games That They But They
made me insane
Life on TV
It's random
It Means Nothing to Me I'm writing down
What I can not Want to see
wake up in a dream Oh
They're telling me
It's beautiful
Them But I believe I will ever know
The World Behind My Wall Oh
The Sun Will Shine Like Never Before
One day I will be ready to go
See the World Behind My Wall ..
(I could bet a hundred, cabbage. Ok, the next time)
Check 'Bill the bathroom (I stress that there was gone. If you do something to your characters, the you can tell us too? Thanks)
"But then they send on the radio every now and then! " (Yet too often, to be sincere. I heard it again yesterday, at the pub, and ruined my beer I was drinking)
" is yours? " (No come on, does it really? It 'friendly and Tokyo does not know their songs? If I were I would have sent her to fuck, you know guys?)
Tom get up' his eyes to heaven. (Thinking that the author was just bad to join them for a protagonist so useless)
"What intuition puppy! "
Sbuffai.
" not stay and do not call him puppy!" (But if you're practically the first Zompa him. And now he must stay by him?) (And then they call you stupid with eight hundred names, and just this which is semi-normal breaks you? Come on!)
" bother you?"
I thought for a moment. After all, he was not there. (no last five years. I would say it's time to get pass the whims, you say?)
" Actually no .. Call me what you like, Baby! " (He also understood to have told her a whore. Thank God)
" I'm bigger than you! "
& ldquo ; no brain .. " (I doubt that you can say this to someone)
I mumbled to myself. (Ah here, you know it, then it simmers so you do not hear. You know you unleash the collective laughter) When
we left the McDonald's I noticed the machine of George and two beautiful Audi TT Audi was the first and second .. An Audi R8!
" Oh.My.God." (You're German, in Italian history. What has the English?)
"What's ; Girls? " (He also asks the same Georg)
I asked Georg
" is .. is .. is .. A is R8 !!!!!!" (dots not like to be disturbed by mass for these bitches. We shall keep you to know)
I let go a scream that Bill had to plug his ears. (I guess the trouble, Bill. I am close)
" But you yell stupid? oO " (Bill in this story is the smartest)
" รจ.Un.R8. "
I said slowly.
Tom looked at me 'smug.
" is MIA .."
"Let me make a girooooooo !!!!!!!!!" (from No, really, the keys are blocked. For sure. Nobody with a brain would use instead, on purpose, all these "or" and those exclamation points all together. For those who respect the law, if for no other reason)
" How?"
" Take me for a ride with I gem. Please ......"
I made sheep's eyes and, as often happened five years ago, he gave up and motioned me to climb. (Eh, I guess. I'm not really sweet eyes, is that you are a spaccamaroni and wants to end it quickly) (I mean if you've been away for five years for a reason, right?)
"What bellooooo!! Grazieeeee! "
I said hopping into the car and sitting at the passenger's seat.
" dick is not even greet me!" (E mo who is speaking?)
I opened the door and yelled to the two boys
" HELLO TIPIIIIII " (We greet people at random)
then closed and impatiently waited for my driver.
I heard the roar of the TT and then the Bill of M5 (BMW M5) Georg before Tom ascended into the car.
" Ready puppy?"
" Try me .." (Proof of what? You have to sit around doing nothing, driving him ...)
started the engine that made a noise similar to a roar of a caged animal (An animal at random. Even a macaque is fine)
" Bello eh?"
He asked and I nodded satisfied.
made me do all the sightseeing of the city that now know how my pockets. (You know, lives there)
I look 'out the window and greet' someone, before parking.
" Please .. Put it! "
He said taking off his sweatshirt and gave me a pair of sunglasses taken from a drawer above the mirror. (A drawer on the mirror? Not say no, but I do not know the machine. I know weird. It was a lot better if they were in the normal storage compartment that is in all models of cars in the world)
" Why?"
" Trust .." ("Do not ever break your balls as usual ...")
I did as I was told ..
" Hey Tom! But where were you? "
asked a familiar voice .. A voice too family .. (exclamation points and questions to the chapel, but the third bullet to put your finger gets tired ...)
Corner Toki
Ok is officially the acting is dedicated to Niki94 xk is the only one that reviews .. TT (not true! I also reviewed, and in great detail. When will FF dedicated to my royal person?)
Dankeeeeee Tipa Adorooo you \u0026lt;3 \u0026lt;3 ^. ^
Bitteeee make me a favoroneee?? (you make one for me. Stop use punctuation to minchiam!) Go ahead with the tuaaa!
With Love (A little German, some in English, some in Italian is good)
_Toki_
PS: No you will have to tame the Chapter 4 .. I have to scrivereeee! tips? (Yes Stop writing and start reading.'ll Find that the books are not written exactly as you do)
Ok, now take your pick. Want the fourth chapter, to know what will happen to the girl and what I will be disgusted by the situation, or do you prefer that we change history? I would like to find someone
Twilight, which seem promising (Promising = Bad as a class test to surprise on the last day of school).
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