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you remember that I hate Twilight and vampires pigoldini true?
I swear that when I see them in concert to me limono Carletto XD (Scherzo love, I swear uu)
are brilliant!
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you remember that I hate Twilight and vampires pigoldini true?
Unfortunately my notes of this test have been lost, so I cobbled together the information around the network.
We learn that Helen has no idea with it 'what is a stem, it' what you get from the bristles. Brava Elena. For my
Cyprus, Marsh is like a gynecologist uu
I'm sorry I really do not know what the hell can never have answered Mary, but we are satisfied. So now we know the whores who shoot.
Yes, I know, it's indecently early. But I am waking from a good hour, and browsing the web in order to give you some crap this afternoon, I found this thing !
I've read all ...
Ok, I read only the title and the first three rows, it is not really that I will publish this post. But I came so, try to see what comments come out spontaneously, without being prepared for reading.
I hope you'll like.
begin to read, I want to see if my crap-Radar is working fine
Title: tales or not ?!?!?! (How could I resist this wonderful title?)
Author: fatina14
Series: Twilight (And ruin this saga is quite difficult. A lot!)
Site: EFP (The usual trash garbage from which I purchase)
My name is Elisa Binelli (Italian? Justifies this, right?) , I'm 17 years old and live in a small town called Forks (Here, I knew . Imagine. It will be the usual self-inserction. But usually they are less blatant) , here the weather is always cloudy, raining always (synonymous with "always" do not exist, as all know. And the joints are bad) in a nutshell is torture (Comma) least for me. I (Come on? This error does not ever prevent it?) live with my grandmother since I was born, my grandmother has more than 85 years (Why say " and more than "and not to the exact year? You do not know how old your grandmother?" And then the numbers in the stories are written with the letters!) and can say that has a screw out of place (How well want your grandmother) , perhaps has been the death of my (Eddagliela I'm with "my", "me" and company) grandfather or maybe it's old age. When he gets near her necklace and says strange nonsense type MONSTERS ARE COMING FROM THE NIGHT BUT I DO NOT LIKE THE OTHERS ARE DIFFERENT, HAVE A HEART EVEN if you have stopped a long time to fight. THERE ARE ONLY THEM, THERE ARE OTHER BAD UNSCRUPULOUS .... BUT ALL LOOKING FOR SOMETHING ... .. (He says it's right, a chapel and red dots included) (That stuff is disgusting, come on. You can not.) (But then what sense is it written?! Really, beyond me ) and say these things when he stops, closes his eyes and gives off a shriek (not screaming his throat. No. She made it, as is done with the smell) ( If you avoid using difficult words that you do not know ...) ... ... Every time I go up there and (Granny, not that you have something to confess? Type a trip to Casablanca because at a young age ...) wonder if all goes well, she always says yes, but not (The grandmother is here beside me, and it is very, very sad by the fact that Elisa has grown without learning the most basic rules of grammar. Oh, and we would like to remind you that since my grandmother, then in possession of the uterus at one time running, the trip to Casablanca has never done) I think ; has dark circles, it seems that does not sleep for days. So (What lousy sentence! Already started badly with that point next to the "So." Fairy, do not feel that it sounds bad?) one day propose to change the air for some time but she always answers no (started poorly and ended worse. If you ask for things just like that ;, it means that you do it once, by chance. So it is that you can always say no. At most I'll say again) , saying that our place is here (Ok, we score, the She did not know how to use the three dots, does not distinguish between "the" from "le" and is not accustomed to correct capitalization. Cara, by chance you missed the first year of primary school? No, because otherwise you will not explain) . Today when I came back from school I felt a strange sensation that I do not know how to explain it myself (Ok, I do not know what to correct. I should rewrite the sentence to make them make sense) . I open the door home, and within (If you walked into without opening it I was concerned) , there is my grandmother who is the 'in front of a huge mirror, never seen, maybe it was down to the basement. (Even here, what do you comment?) The greeting and ask if everything is OK and where he took the mirror, she answers, you (And this "is" that makes us out here? Have you lost, little girl? ) \u0026lt;\u0026lt; ; THE BEGINNING. >> I do not understand (Eh, but I think what we understand ...) the beginning of what?? (question who did not want to be disturbed ...) \u0026lt;\u0026lt;Grandma call a doctor, you're sick (It is bad only because it reflects and says, "start"? And if you do cough, call the hearse?) I always say you need a rest, you have to stay in bed but .... >> I'm not finish speaking (why bother to say crap) and tells me: \u0026lt;\u0026lt;do not need no doctor, approached the mirror, stand next to me and looks. All your questions will be revealed, do not you ever wonder what had happened to your parents ?????? (Elena, look to use one, a question mark instead of a hundred thousand, does not change anything!) What had happened to your grandfather ????? (But what do I say this ...) Come here and get all the answers. (A part that the bullet would go out, now I just want to see that beautiful answer who invents) >> Ok, I was getting really scared, my grandfather had died doing (Facendo. ..) a road accident in Italy, exactly in Volterra, as he walked (Ah here, then "doing" was wrong more than I thought!) . A drunk guy the investment! (But I've bought in discount 'sti so? What, there was the offer "and type in one They come out ten"?) But my parents did not know, (That's where the missing comma before!) I knew nothing except that they too were dead (So you know something) .... \u0026lt;\u0026lt; grandmother (the hunting of capital, by God!) , you know that my grandfather died in Italy for ("In" we do not want to use their own eh ...) a car accident, and now you come with me, I'll take you to bed. >> I was approaching to take her hand but she was + (my holy Madonna. I figured it was bad, but you are touching peaks of unimaginable atrocities) quickly to me, drew close to the mirror (E) you put the necklace in front. The mirror and lit them (there) there was a sequence of images (A coincidence, the film Titanic, maybe) between those images and my grandfather was also bitten by by (Umpa, da da umpaaa ... uh, sorry) ... . What was that monster?? (I hope you will split the key to force pigiarlo!) Images ended early, I was in shock, what the hell the images were. All those things I said about my grandfather were crap (There was only a picture of someone biting your grandfather, from which the cabbage can deduce that they were all bullshit? Then, all .. .'s death at the most) , the explanations I had absolutely!! (Even this you should split, of course) \u0026lt;\u0026lt;GRANDMOTHER>> (And here the exclamation that there was good ...) (It broke mica button? I hope there eh. ..) the (Oh, the small mercies of the Lord) said (at most "the urlasti) , she turned to me and took me on the couch , began to speak; \u0026lt;\u0026lt;you know that more than a century our family is considered the Vampire Slayer: ( Why use punctuation as it seems to you! It's not an artistic thing, there are rules!) Let me finish then you can ask me to explain everything you want, ( Other areas and other poor random fixed point was without a job. You should feel very guilty, know this) each individual by the name Scinà Binelli and has the power to kill + (ok,, what comment to make now ...) vampires possible (That shit is power to kill vampires + possible "? At most it is a duty ...) , of course until you are bled of their blood (I wonder what else you can be bled, as specified) (But then that speech is, it is normal when you are out you can not kill anyone, thank you!) . This series here (Just this eh, not that other there) protects us in the sense that conceals our true identity Vampire Slayer, to so that vampires do not kill us. Be aware that not all families Scinà Binelli and have this power because every Vampire Slayer must have a strong heart willing to do anything (eh sorry, but thank fuck. I do not see what the heart has to do to strong. If you're destined for even if you are a coward) , also separated from her child. For example, your mother, she had a strong heart, you just came into the world, ; you entrust (entrusted, if anything) me to make sure that your future was a bit ' + (What problems do you have with the word "more" fairy?) peaceful but for his bad luck after birth, had gone along with your father to kill a vampire and they were very strong killed (Look, Fairy, the next time you write something, go to 'link and see if I'm useful: Click me to learn new words ) both. You know we are not the only ones who kill vampires, but there are also shape shifters. They only defend their territories, but we walk above in Italy (E caper that we do so in Forks, which is the only place where there are already deficient the werewolves?) . There there lies a strong family of vampires, the Volturi are called rumors say that (You'll understand the voices, all the St. Vamp. It was enough to catch one to be sure) , we also say ; that this family is stronger than any vampire killer, however, today I'll take you to the push (who enjoyed the capital) , there are the shape-shifting and there (Yes, there, we understand) you will be protected, and you can even begin to discover your powers! (But you had broken the? It's not nice to break it hopes other eh) questions?>> (Eh. maybe a couple, you're saying? Madonna, is ; fool even his grandmother. ok, you could tell by how he talks) \u0026lt;\u0026lt;So now I'm getting the ansi Vampires Changeling (No dear, And Vampires Changeling) ?? but they were not only favoleeeeeee (What is this disease that is stretching the words? But it contagious? E 'grave? No, because I see that all soffron) ?? \u0026lt;\u0026lt;I thought were just fairy tales! When you take me by shapeshifter you will remain there with me, right!>> (Of course, after discovering that it is not normal human, that your son died so horrible that there are creatures in the world monstrous, one is concerned with 'is bitch) My grandmother began to laugh, a laugh between (I'm hysterical laughter, no longer holds her niece) el other replied: \u0026lt;\u0026lt;but of course not, my time is over, now I can also reach our family. (Chiuse. quotes .. uh ...?) I felt bad, she was everything I had, I could not leave like that, then he says: "I do not want to be a Vampire Slayer! NOT WITHOUT YOU !!!!>> (yells Fuck do you know only you) She extension (I begin to suspect that the button has broken the "O") necklace and placed it between my hands, \u0026lt;\u0026lt; This will protect you from every single vampire (I doubt, given the nice effect made by the alliance goes rio ) not you be so stupid as to not understand. Without you the world will be dominated by vampires, then you can not escape your fate, you want to know why they are still alive?? The reason is simple (I say nothing, I swear that I remain silent .. .) until the necklace is in my hands, and the heir is not yet ready to have it, I can continue to live for 100 (Cento) years but when the heir is ready I am forced to give it to him without his consent. >> (I 'is only girl seems ready for a psychiatric examination, other than Slayer) not wanted, not wanted, not wanted, (we get it!) but why? ?? \u0026lt;\u0026lt;I'm not ready and never will be (I hate to admit it, but I agree with her) , if you're not on my side, please grandmother leave me.>> By now the tears began to fall. I saw (But because people do not re-read?) my grandmother approached me and said: \u0026lt;\u0026lt;my baby, do not cry, now you'll be sad but one day you'll understand everything. You are the last heir of the family and Binelli Scinà and not have to worry about what will happen to me, you just know that I love you !!!>> (Oh God, what bad pictures that I comes to mind. Bleah, gradually, shoo!) (I no to vomit, sorry) (-----------------) (Ok, here I am) My grandmother took me three hands face and said: \u0026lt;\u0026lt;Elisa I you must promise that everything I tell you, the you have to do even if what you say and foolish or stupid. If I say run, you escape, if I tell you to hide, you hide without saying anything, ok?>> (But you were not cracks?) He (Suddenly, the present) a face so serious, I just wish that if it were a dream, to wake up as soon as possible, because I did not like! (But-that-shit-of-sentence) \u0026lt;> My grandmother turned to one of the windows on the face and had a 'terrified expression, which was going on?? (Ah boh, unless you know you're there) \u0026lt;\u0026lt;Elisa, a vampire is coming here to kill us, (Oh shit, but so soon? So you and for seventeen odd years you've never removed the necklace? Who knows how many hairs will be stuck in the closing time) but here we'll stay just me!! You're going to push the!! This vampire has the power of the hound (Shit I'll never know ...) in the sense that it is enough to smell you, he'll find anywhere in the world, (The grandmother speaks as an immigrant in Italy six months. Or rather, is the author who has the same mastery of a clandestine Italian) but the necklace will protect you, his power is great now and get the keys run!! >> I had promised and could not all remain (not really your own opinion, but if the plot so he wants ...) , I went to my grandmother, I gave her a kiss on the cheek and he says: "I love you. >> I turned the car keys taken, I went home, went inside the mini cooper, I put in motion and set off at full speed into the woods hoping that I would (to find) found a path that would take me to the push (who wants to capitalize like before) + the soon as possible! ( And this was the first chapter. Imagine the other, when they will have to manage multiple characters) (Have you noticed how the author has not felt in the mood to go head to never ever ever? I will, I've lost a couple of diopters)
Finished!
What can I say, I hope you enjoy it.
Actually re-reading I took at least half of the more verbose comments and most of those fussy, because now there was a line of pink every three words, and exaggerating: p Hope you
like a nice day ^ ^
This time I am very fun to write.
Ps: Maybe the girl is fourteen years old. This does not justify ignoring the fact that some of the most basic rules of grammar, absolutely, even if he says the naivete of the plot. What
still sucks, and I was writing at his age without posting meaningful stuff around.
So Fairy, I hope that my criticisms will help you grow as a writer.
course, does not mean that I will continue to comment on your work, as long as it is now will remain mediocre. I'll do it and I have fun there, because I'm a bitch and bad acid: p
Hello girls:) In
delay of a week, but finally I write the commentary of the second episode of which is that neuronicida The pupa and the nerd.
I discovered the world of WoW and I like a good nerd, there are passionate, that's the reason for my disappearance XD Forgive me.
If we add that this episode was a noiaaaa ...
But let's move on and start. It begins immediately with the
ask important questions, like:
But who wears the makeup and Barale? It seems the owner of a brothel ...
Or
But the pupae they dress themselves, or are there costume with this wicked taste? My Barbie clothes had more sober and less bright colors ...
Among all, Platinette, in his full pink butt is the most simple and elegant, which is saying something.
The events remain in the house at levels unheard of pathos. I was in nerd Flo, Pasqualina or Ludovica from that moment that I left. Why
ok pulling a hair more fi ** a bullock cart, but here it goes too far.
These guys play the dignity to life for nothing! It 's ridiculous.
We see scenes from sweet and delicate, as are those between Flo slaps deCamillis, Pasqualina who orders his nerd to sleep on the floor (and he obeys!) And the shocking sight of Woo you do your nails, when in fact the first thing to do would be to shave.
For the poor public that each episode has it in his underwear, if not for himself. I risk of rejection dinner every time!
After the video, the troiona plasticky Parietti said that Flo was right to slap Tassinari, and I start to pray in Cyrillic.
For what? But because a spotlight falls on his head, obviously. uu
The program officially starts only now, and I am already upset. It will be a looong night.
not help that the pumpkin quiz has been less dramatic than usual idiot. He told her to cooked and raw, but on a less obvious characters. Rightly, though, if Dante and the Dalai Lama I put them in the first episode, not even after that you can memorize, and other characters so trivial, outside the world of entertainment, there are not many then.
Monica makes a decent test. I think that girl is not stupid at all, just pretends. In addition Garagozzo is good. But what are you doing here, Monica? You're so normal ...
Okay, said the Betrothed were Renzo and Sofia, but it was a slip of the tongue, come on ...
Francesca, in her belief that Frank Sinatra is the president of the United States (or Elvis, choice) is already doing more laughing. Also because in theory it is a character in the show, and she should know.
Flo figures of course do the usual shit, saying that Ludwig Van Beethoven and Dracula uu Sigh. Or a playboy Casanova j___j. Shakespeare ... A amplain of crap all together
Guess Gianni Agnelli, but the figure is the first of shit.
After her my attention began to wane, causes fever, so I do not know who threw these gems to the public:
Marco Travaglio is Terence Hill
Sherlock Holmes or Stalin LaRussa
This I am very sorry, because they are phrases that show that have not yet understood how the game works, and I'd be curious to see what is so stupid,
Elena, who is in the pink of the most idiotic, has not been for sure, because it disappeared at the beginning of episode due to illness.
He vomited all the time, and it was nice to him if he did Popes, indeed.
Pasqualina Pumpkin closes the quiz saying that Van Gogh is a servant. What better end ...
We continue the show with a video right on the torque Tassinari / Pasqualina, and we are shown scenes ...
Rate is treated no more or less like a dog. He sleeps on the floor, takes orders and brings stuff to Lina, without pulling a breath.
If I had tried to treat my husband well, I'd be the first single, the second would have probably died. As would be right, anyway.
It is emphasized that rates have a better erection while drying, blowing on it, the enamel at the foot of the girl.
are things that I preferred not to know, and thank you very much.
Soon after, there is explained the scene of the slap.
Positions: Flo lying on the legs of White, while it plays with deCamillis to throw a ball of paper / contenitorino of ice cream, it's not clear.
The ball, ends up accidentally to touch the nose redone Flo (Touch bounce, is not that ends up in your face) and her sclera, threatening in a physical and verbal deCamillis, and slapping him several times.
him, who is a gentleman, not the quarry the skin of her ass strapped, but 'Shut up and ride, especially with the mentally ill, there is little to be done.
obvious is how it should be, and has all the public against anyone tells her to apologize to deCamillis, but she, as well as crazy and violent that it is also an idiot, says that it would be all puffed disingenuous to ask your pardon, as it is sure to be right.
Flo, but fuck off you go.
I do not want to be taken off only for the poor deCamillis, but you know that I hate.
The following tests are stupid, useless, boring and demeaning, and I do not have one without looking at them.
Just know that the poor boys were dressed as a cowboy and had to say a hard time to get started.
The only phrase that would have been real hard, "I do not do this stupid game," but to my knowledge has not been pronounced.
bad.
but there was a beautiful scene.
Garagozzo, punching the pungingball (part of this test), not only catches the thing in the face, but it does get straight on the gonads of Popes XD beautiful scene.
Apart from this, for what I saw, the show is pitiful.
I say in defense of the nerd, that any person, whatever seems to be an idiot to do in those tests, so I'm stupid.
comes time to decide who will be in a runoff for the elimination next week, and I have lost the name of the second pair.
I know is that we risk losing deCamillis: (
All because of that bitch stregaccia acid, which is now hated by all Italy -.-
Mado what I hate.
Among the pairs to be deleted, Woo / Ludovica and White / Maria Teresa Maria Teresa leaves.
I must say I'm sorry, White was very nice.
And now, the highlight of the evening!
comes, surprisingly, in the program, the more Pupa pupose of all Italy! A Barbie
six feet high, which is identical to the beloved doll around! Measures, hair, eyes, mouth, makeup, clothes, expression ... Tell
some detail of Barbie, which is not the lack of attributes, and this girl we will have the same! The Cipriani
comes between us!
twins separated at birth?
Surprisingly, the girl is paired with its white! I
happy twice, in fact!
Reason 1) is white
Reason 2) Log real Pupa craniolesa! Wonderful! She gives us happiness
already in the choice of his nerd (In fact he could choose between White and a new one), for his complete inability to decide. Two minutes passed in silence and, she says, is pressing and the Popes. Here the curtain:
Papi: Crank Up the neurons and give us an answer
Cipriani: Well, then a second time.
Yeah I love it. (NB: She is a graduate eh)
The following test is stupid and pointless, with everyone dressed in costumes of fur leopard. My brain is gone outraged by such great stupidity, and I have not followed.
I am sure that there is nothing to be lost.
With the next game, a must in the last edition, will receive the first great satisfaction from Cipriani. But the other ...
The game is played between three girls in costume, will stand on a platform vibromassaggiante, with the band placed on derrier.
distraction.
Personally, I think the distrarrei if I rubbed his head. Apparently the director has a clear idea of where the brain is placed in these girls. I can only agree.
Vista test carried out by the beautiful girls, obviously directed we got it. Among Monica, Cipriani and Flo do not know who was the worst, really ...
We carry the most beautiful as well as the answers are:
Papi: Who was Juno?
Cipriani: The wife of an Orc. Or Herself. O Garibaldi
Papi : As Julius Caesar died?
Monica: He died beaten ...
Papi : How greeted the Romans?
Flo: Hello from
Cipriani: A 'beautiful, or
Hallo Papi : Cipriani, Cipriani move synapses
: * shakes her tits * (I'm seriously thinking of establishing a fan club for this woman, and 'magnificent)
At the end of episode, as it should be, there is evidence of the cream on your thighs. At that point I put dumb and I attacked the game until they started pupa never say, because I abhor the rape of a philosophy that puts them into the last minutes of the program.
next week (Ok, now last week), will be deleted or Flo or Monica. I do not know really, if you should choose based on the pupae, then it better kept Monica, but ten times ...
Well girls, thanks for listening!
We feel these days for the review of puntatona this Sunday and maybe for some fanfiction or movies!
I am seriously thinking to open myself a YouTube channel to name a few Videorecensione, but it is still a much unsubstantiated, so the movie reviews I probably will keep the heat for some time.
But it is said.
A kiss, and the next one!
Mortini sticks to the game * *
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is back with the "" wonderful "" "The story of Toki! I hope it Be glad, because I have suffered very much, in reading it.
I do not think of going forward with this story, because his stupidity is also boring. And
prefer to read bad stuff but that makes you laugh, if your junk or treated: p So
(unless many do not weep in mourning for that matter) say "Hello, hello" NonDimenticartiDiMe.
started!
Title: NonDimenticartiDiMe
Author: Latok
Site Origin: EFP
-3 ° Chapter
" There it is!"
I said Denny (The Denny. If there's one thing I hate are the errors derived from the dialects. It would take so little to be correct by a beta ...) pointing to my sister who was holding one hand and cried.
" Lari!"
exclaimed running to her, I saw that when I leave 'hand I do not know' and those who came to meet me
" I swear that if you do it again. .
" CusaCusaaaaa" (Ok, the small talk bad ... but why the double capital and the two words run together? These are your errors, Toki, not the child)
she told me through tears (You could not break the sentence so that it sucks to rats? What, long sentences are bad?)
" Sorry .."
I raised my head to see if they said to me.
I stood paralyzed. (nice! At least the story ends with this bad thing happened to the protagonist!) (Unfortunately it is not true, not all)
was there. In front of me. With chocolate brown eyes locked on mine (Comma) now, after his departure, colored ice. (I doubt it?)
Gustav. (Hello, Gustav)
" is your daughter?" (The fact of not knowing how to type correctly is "capital" does not mean that you can put tiny. He opened World and did everything himself, it is not difficult. Or put it as "E '" ;, as I do when I'm feeling particularly lazy)
seemed so much a mother?
" Nono .. is my sister .. " (four errors in a sentence of five words. It can not, come on)
" is a bit 'naughty, eh? " (I give up, do as you please. I can not emphasize the same things)
I smiled. That smile made me feel sick, so was the time that I did not see.
averted my gaze from her eyes.
" Yes. Sometimes it is even worse .. Crazy me and my brother .. " (I own those pricks who even remembers you. Who would not?)
" Have we met? " ( Georg in this story has serious mental problems. How can you not recognize their former, which in theory has been important to you? E 'from brain)
I asked suddenly.
Yes. We know each other .. We loved all those years ago '.. I still love you even if you never admit it (And if after five years you have not rebuilt a life you have big problems, you were counting children) , even under torture (Let? Pull out the hose and the clamps? ) .. I regret having to lie .. But I have to .. For your own good .. (But if you decide he is for his own good or not! I hate these excuses trivial) (saws that do not mind rubbing anything to anyone)
" No. . I'm sorry .. "I
eyes swelled with tears (I noticed now as there is a fixed point MAI) (Actually no, there is one after" Gustav ". But only one since the beginning of the story)
" I have to go, sorry .."
" least tell me your name .." (Tell me what do you care. I wonder mica as to all those that cross, you know what a mess otherwise?)
" Sharon .." (And she tells him. The fair idiocy) (Double idiocy, because they do not want to be recognized)
Then I turned away and went
Reached my friends asked if we could go
" Why?"
"What have you got Flee?"
" sister .. Why are you crying? " (As remains unclear who speaks in the dialogues of Latok. Thank goodness that makes them speak little)
" Please .. Let's go .. "He
look 'back in (In back is beautiful) and I know ' which saw him because I took his arm and took me 'out.
The other without saying a word followed us. (They were too astonished to speak. They wondered what evil fate had meant that should be your friend. Will the author, girls)
***
got home crying with my brother and my sister (They cried together, in unison) .. The girls (The girls) were go home without asking me questions about my sudden tears .. My mother had gone out again to "work" (so named but I do think the worst ...) and so I also had to cook dinner .. (You have to prepare a meal for two people and a girl, not a Christmas meal for forty people eh)
" kill me! Kill me! " (I was not normal that I told you now eh! You are witnesses! And that damn ambulance of the asylum yet arrives)
I had started yelling at Aaron (What you ask what the hell he got to do the entire 'story is, poor)
" WORLD OF SHIT! Where is JUSTICE ??!!?!?!?" (I've been wondering myself. Why do some people own a PC?) (My personal solace in part)
My brother remained silent, staring at me .. He could not do anything else, he knew how I felt. (No, he was shocked and hoped to be adopted, because they share genetic heritage with a well is not a good thing)
" sister, please stop it .." ("... you make me ashamed ")
begged me .. I could not .. I felt the phone vibrate and I answered without even looking at who he was. (For a answers the phone who wants to die ...)
" Hello?"
I said in a trembling voice ..
" Sharon?"
" Oh God! Georg! "
" Hello baby! Why is voice suck? Sore throat? xD " (Smilies precipitate the story of at least three steps, based on my rating scale. And the story was already worth)
was a jack ass, but I was so happy to hear his voice that I highly fregai. (But you were not on the brink of suicide three lines ago?)
" No. . Never mind .. Why did you call? "
Tears had temporarily stopped falling ..
" We are there in your part! Come for a ride? Bill would love to see you again! " (Not only is the ex of one of the TH, pucci girlfriend is also the peak of everyone else. But this stuff should not remain in the secret diaries of twelve years old? Why is a site for amateur writing?)
" I. .."
"There will be Gustav .. Quiet, I'm not so stupid .. " (In all history, for the moment, you'd be the only one. But I already know 'minds that, then I have no illusions)
I thought for a moment then said
"Why , no? Where are you? " (The hysteria has gone well? Will be happy with your brother, since two idiots you console a lot more of him) (Ok, on second thought maybe he is happy, actually) He laughed
" If you look out your window you see me, Tonto! \u0026lt;3 "(The little heart ... madonna santa) (A little 'I am ashamed to know that that's a little heart, but I was twelve years too)
Courses in the kitchen and moved the curtain covering the window.
I saw him. My best friend. The only person who had kept his promise ..
Do not make me suffer. (What emo stuff)
I hastily wiped her tears and I said to Aaron
" I'm going out Bro! Ge there! You come? " (Bro? Brother? Mioddio, but because an Italian must put 'ste robe in his stories?)
He stares at me' wrong but then smiled (Because you get up from your feet smiling, not for others)
" No, sore between ( Sigh) I'm at home with Lari .. I love dumb miaaaa! ^. ^ "
" Piccolooo I too! " (But who is stretching the words to say very normal stuff? But this girl beat the test? No, of course. If read aloud their stories heard the crap that makes his characters say and avoid)
took the money, and I put the phone in your pocket all (Via the 'me'. It is obvious that your pockets are, I doubt if I put my stuff into the pockets of someone who was passing by case) to then go out and run into the arms of Georg. In
arm in the true sense of the word! XD (Knowing this is useful in. ..?)
" Hello little one!"
" Bellooo Hello!"
I clung to him for not fall and he took me by the legs to help me ..
" So how? " (What are you asking? A speech that you have left behind the last time?)
" Now you're here it's better .. & rdquo ; (Oh no, was asking her how she is! Latok, looks just like that is not asked in Italian eh)
" I'm glad, baby .." (Other nicknames that those twenty or thirty of the first chapter were few)
He said he gave me a kiss on the cheek and moving the honey blonde hair.
I stood up to him and looked for a moment. (But if you are in arm with him that you raise your legs ... how can you stand? At best it makes you fall)
He had been .. As if to say ..
him was not changed, always had emerald green eyes of his great and long hair .. (In Crucconia, a country where the FF is set, usually people tend to change color of eyes every few years? But that curious custom ...)
Then the muscles were increased! XD (at most "but" not "then")
" setting? "
I asked him, smiling
" No excuse .. Nothing .. "
" You've changed, you know? "
" That statement tontaaaa! >. \u0026lt;" (You have no idea what I am trying to rewrite 'history is in an Italian decent and sensible) (But would a crap, because of the plot, then let it go)
was obvious that I was changed. (not so obvious eh)
I was taller, had longer hair (Appunto. I do not grow more than thirteen years since I have long hair and are always equal) and eyes .. His eyes were now a deep blue sea, a blue ice. (No, seriously. eyes not change color! But for nothing! What idiot can do it why should yours?)
" I know .. "
I answered him, smiling.
" Geeee! And then I'm a pig! " (?? EH?) (Why are all cry?)
I heard the unmistakable voice, even if not listened to for a long time, my sex- gott (I say it means' I run? Please. It had to do it the author, but obviously annoyed) preferred.
Tom Kaulitz.
" scendereeeee me!" (nerves that makes me 'is the protagonist)
yells in my ears and I give up 'immediately. (Of course, poor.'s Have broken through the eardrums. Mado who took the blows if he did it to me)
" Beautiful Sharon! How is it? " (but still 'I' is"? Do not use! We stuffed it in his head?)
" Hello Tom! & Rdquo ;
run with them I said to him. (Commas should be used but ...)
The only difference was that he could not jump on him ..
For the simple fact that it was kind of a pig! (join the sentences, yes or no?)
" dog .. We were up, you know? "
" Porco! XD "
spoke against the soft cotton of his sweatshirt. (We do not know in what way has become the darling of the TH, but we know that members of the group use to add much fabric softener when doing laundry. First things first, and rightly so)
" Come on bro, let me greet Sha! " (I'll spoiler, Bill is talking about. Character very well made, a real woman whining)
I left Tom and hugged Bill, as he did years ago, 'sneak' head between my neck and my hair. (POS What the hell is it? Demand to see it. Now. Now!)
" always make me feel bigger, you know Billini ?" (sneak into my head between the neck and hair? Why should this have an effect aging?)
" But you're older big sister .."
Bill and I always felt there brother and sister .. I do not know 'why! = D (Why the author is a fan of TH , which, moreover, did not even want to invent a story so)
"Ugh he's even noticed! "
Grumpy 'Tom.
I turned towards him.
" braids? Yes, I noticed! Do you take me for? "I said pretending
offense. (In fact the only one offended should be the real Tom, that is passed to a hysterical bimbaminkia) (Correct me, all four TH should feel offended by FF on them. Thank goodness those poor guys do not know the Italian) (Who can help me to translate 'ste robe in German?)
Then I rivoltai to Bill who was sulking in his shoes fixed.
Sbuffai.
" .. And yes, I also noticed the Bill thy crest! You are both very well! " (good opportunities to use correct grammar thrown in the toilet) (also the dignity of Bill is thrown in the toilet, I would like to emphasize. I begin to think that this girl is an anti, or I explains why his heroes make go to the hysterical queens )
I turned to Georg
" The only one that did not change anything are you? & rdquo ;
was about to reply when I heard Bill say
" Even Gustav did not change anything! "
I moved away from him, my smile went out, happiness in seeing my best friends went with it and looked down at holding back tears .. (My Mother, for a name? And when he sees you do, you kill yourself?)
" Bill you are really stupid you know?" (No, it is Sharon who is totally deficient and has no sense of measure)
said Tom.
Georg came to me and hug me '
" Scusalo Girl .. We told him not to talk about .. I'm sorry .. " (" It 's a jerk, but touching take it as it is, because he is the one that appeals to us bimbominkiaragazzine and sell those CDs full of canzonacce)
" Never mind .. Quiet, a bit of 'me go .. " (There was not even begin if we are honest)
I whispered away from him and taking a handkerchief to blow my nose.
"Sorry Sha .."
I said sorry Bill ..
" Quiet .. Go after a while 'pass me .. "
" We go to McDonald's ? " (" What I do not care about giving head in this mental deficient ")
TomChurches.
I wanted to hug him for having changed the subject. (Which proves your idiocy. Usually if you're bad you do not want to eat meat (?) Of unknown animals)
" Ok!"
***
We ate like pigs .. I did not eat so .. Well, never mind .. ("What have the short-term memory and I do not remember")
" What do you think?"
I asked Georg.
" Pago?"
" But we do not even think about!"
I gave him a kiss on the cheek
" Grazieee! \u0026lt;3! " (Love do not love .... And then you pay at McDonald's before. Latok Heck, we'll have to Mk each time, no?)
then transmitted to the radio a song I've heard .. (ten euro bet that is a song of TH)
.. It's raining today
The blinds are shut
It's Always the same
I tried to play the games That They But They
made me insane
Life on TV
It's random
It Means Nothing to Me I'm writing down
What I can not Want to see
wake up in a dream Oh
They're telling me
It's beautiful
Them But I believe I will ever know
The World Behind My Wall Oh
The Sun Will Shine Like Never Before
One day I will be ready to go
See the World Behind My Wall ..
(I could bet a hundred, cabbage. Ok, the next time)
Check 'Bill the bathroom (I stress that there was gone. If you do something to your characters, the you can tell us too? Thanks)
"But then they send on the radio every now and then! " (Yet too often, to be sincere. I heard it again yesterday, at the pub, and ruined my beer I was drinking)
" is yours? " (No come on, does it really? It 'friendly and Tokyo does not know their songs? If I were I would have sent her to fuck, you know guys?)
Tom get up' his eyes to heaven. (Thinking that the author was just bad to join them for a protagonist so useless)
"What intuition puppy! "
Sbuffai.
" not stay and do not call him puppy!" (But if you're practically the first Zompa him. And now he must stay by him?) (And then they call you stupid with eight hundred names, and just this which is semi-normal breaks you? Come on!)
" bother you?"
I thought for a moment. After all, he was not there. (no last five years. I would say it's time to get pass the whims, you say?)
" Actually no .. Call me what you like, Baby! " (He also understood to have told her a whore. Thank God)
" I'm bigger than you! "
& ldquo ; no brain .. " (I doubt that you can say this to someone)
I mumbled to myself. (Ah here, you know it, then it simmers so you do not hear. You know you unleash the collective laughter) When
we left the McDonald's I noticed the machine of George and two beautiful Audi TT Audi was the first and second .. An Audi R8!
" Oh.My.God." (You're German, in Italian history. What has the English?)
"What's ; Girls? " (He also asks the same Georg)
I asked Georg
" is .. is .. is .. A is R8 !!!!!!" (dots not like to be disturbed by mass for these bitches. We shall keep you to know)
I let go a scream that Bill had to plug his ears. (I guess the trouble, Bill. I am close)
" But you yell stupid? oO " (Bill in this story is the smartest)
" è.Un.R8. "
I said slowly.
Tom looked at me 'smug.
" is MIA .."
"Let me make a girooooooo !!!!!!!!!" (from No, really, the keys are blocked. For sure. Nobody with a brain would use instead, on purpose, all these "or" and those exclamation points all together. For those who respect the law, if for no other reason)
" How?"
" Take me for a ride with I gem. Please ......"
I made sheep's eyes and, as often happened five years ago, he gave up and motioned me to climb. (Eh, I guess. I'm not really sweet eyes, is that you are a spaccamaroni and wants to end it quickly) (I mean if you've been away for five years for a reason, right?)
"What bellooooo!! Grazieeeee! "
I said hopping into the car and sitting at the passenger's seat.
" dick is not even greet me!" (E mo who is speaking?)
I opened the door and yelled to the two boys
" HELLO TIPIIIIII " (We greet people at random)
then closed and impatiently waited for my driver.
I heard the roar of the TT and then the Bill of M5 (BMW M5) Georg before Tom ascended into the car.
" Ready puppy?"
" Try me .." (Proof of what? You have to sit around doing nothing, driving him ...)
started the engine that made a noise similar to a roar of a caged animal (An animal at random. Even a macaque is fine)
" Bello eh?"
He asked and I nodded satisfied.
made me do all the sightseeing of the city that now know how my pockets. (You know, lives there)
I look 'out the window and greet' someone, before parking.
" Please .. Put it! "
He said taking off his sweatshirt and gave me a pair of sunglasses taken from a drawer above the mirror. (A drawer on the mirror? Not say no, but I do not know the machine. I know weird. It was a lot better if they were in the normal storage compartment that is in all models of cars in the world)
" Why?"
" Trust .." ("Do not ever break your balls as usual ...")
I did as I was told ..
" Hey Tom! But where were you? "
asked a familiar voice .. A voice too family .. (exclamation points and questions to the chapel, but the third bullet to put your finger gets tired ...)
Corner Toki
Ok is officially the acting is dedicated to Niki94 xk is the only one that reviews .. TT (not true! I also reviewed, and in great detail. When will FF dedicated to my royal person?)
Dankeeeeee Tipa Adorooo you \u0026lt;3 \u0026lt;3 ^. ^
Bitteeee make me a favoroneee?? (you make one for me. Stop use punctuation to minchiam!) Go ahead with the tuaaa!
With Love (A little German, some in English, some in Italian is good)
_Toki_
PS: No you will have to tame the Chapter 4 .. I have to scrivereeee! tips? (Yes Stop writing and start reading.'ll Find that the books are not written exactly as you do)
Ok, now take your pick. Want the fourth chapter, to know what will happen to the girl and what I will be disgusted by the situation, or do you prefer that we change history? I would like to find someone
Twilight, which seem promising (Promising = Bad as a class test to surprise on the last day of school).